A Poem:::::::::::::::"Tick, Tick, Tick........."

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Nov 16, 2009 7:49 am A Poem:::::::::::::::::::::: "Tick, Tick, Tick..............." #

Manohar Bhatia Hello,
This fictional poem was written a long time back,when my late wife was alive,but I thought it was time to share it with my members.
For those of you,who might be interested in knowing my wife,Shoba Bhatia,please click on my friends'list on Shoba Bhatia and read her profile.She was a former member of ryze for some years.Thanks.

I see my clock on the wall
Saying tick,tick,tick,
You talk or don't talk,
My clock is ticking,
Tick, Tick, Tick.

Far, far, away,
In the deep oceans,
There are mighty tides,
Just as a small tide,
in my affairs.

My clock has no emotions,
but gives powerful message
of time we spent to-gather
in pursuit of love,friendships
courtships,events,happenings.

I know I have done wrong,
whence your anger knows no bounds,
only tell me the reason
of your hounding,bypassing,ignoring,
and not talking to me.

Oh! my beloved,
we can always sit calmly,
and talk things over,
to forgive,forget, and
turnover new life,of trust,love,care.

Life is far too short
to brood over,sulk,sink,
into mental turmoil,pain,depression,
'cause,my clock is ticking,
tick, tick, tick!

I kneel before you,cautioning,
You, me, everything
will be consumed
by the sound of
tick, tick, tick!

Only my clock,
will remain on the wall,
Deaf,dumb,muted,and balanced
but, still warning, sounding,
Tick! Tick! Tick!

---The End----

Manohar Bhatia


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Nov 16, 2009 10:35 am re: A Poem:::::::::::::::::::::: "Tick, Tick, Tick..............." #

Jack Huber "Life is far too short
to brood over, sulk, sink,
into mental turmoil, pain, depression,
'cause,my clock is ticking,
tick, tick, tick!"

Words to live by.

Jack



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Nov 16, 2009 10:56 am re: A Poem:::::::::::::::::::::: "Tick, Tick, Tick..............." #

Maya Mahant oh manohar,

what a lovely poem, i could feel the seconds ticking by.

warm regards
maya


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Nov 16, 2009 11:17 am re: re: A Poem:::::::::::::::::::::: "Tick, Tick, Tick..............." #

Ayub Bangroo
Time is eternal,unstoppable,we feel it by hearing the tick,tick,tick.......


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Nov 17, 2009 8:15 am re: re: re: A Poem:::::::::::::::::::::: "Tick, Tick, Tick..............." #

Diane Tegarden
Yes, Manohar, we all have that clock ticking our moments away, the key is to use that time the best we can because one never knows when the last moment will pass, and so shall we.

In honor of your late wife,
Diane

Energetically Yours, Diane Tegarden
"Getting OUT of Limbo-A Self Help Divorce Book for Women";"Light Through
Shuttered Window- A Compendium of my Poetry";"Anti-Vigilante and The
Rips in Time"- available at www.firewalkerpublications.com and www.Amazon.com


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Nov 17, 2009 9:57 pm re: A Poem:::::::::::::::::::::: "Tick, Tick, Tick..............." #

Manohar Bhatia Hello,
Jack:Thanks for liking a few words from the poem.
Maya:"I feel the seconds ticking by......" don't let go these moments of joy.
Ayub:"Time is eternal...." drown yourself in joy.
Diane:Many thanks to your tribute to my late wife,Shoba Bhatia.

Manohar Bhatia


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