Tuesday, November 24, 2009

A Poem*************** "On Smallest"

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Aug 17, 2009 9:44 am Poem: "On Smallest" #

Manohar Bhatia
Short Poem::::::::: "On Smallest"
The smallest distance
between two points
is a line;but the
smallest distance between
two persons is only
a line of communication!

The smallest planet in the
universe is not a star
as seen by a naked eye,
but a STAR that cannot be
seen in an ugly planet!

The smallest appreciation
is not the one saying
'thank you'but a smallest
gesture that shows appreciation
without saying anything!

The smallest mistake is
not the one that hurts the
self,but the one that
hurt the other selves!

The smallest truth is not
the one which is real,
but the one that is
a lie fabricated by truth!

The smallest error between
cup and lip is a slip,
And the smallest mistake
between patience and restraint
is slip of the tongue!

The smallest compact disc
is not the one
measured in size,
but is the one
with unlimited storage!

The smallest talk
is not the one spoken
by mouth,but the one
known by telepathy!

The smallest walk
is not of one step,
but a walk-over
in your absence!

The smallest tide
is not measured in height,
but is calculated
in the affairs of men!

The smallest confusion
is not with word 'confusion'
in an English language
but 'confusion' being used
as a metaphor!

The smallest love
is not a kiss planted
on the lips,but a
love camouflaged by lust!

_____ The End ____




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Aug 17, 2009 11:19 am re: Poem: "On Smallest" #

Diane Tegarden
Hi Manohar,

this is my favorite stanza of your poem:

"The smallest appreciation
is not the one saying
'thank you' but a smallest
gesture that shows appreciation
without saying anything!"


I can relate.

Thanks for leading off our poetry thread this morning,
Diane

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Aug 17, 2009 12:48 pm re: Poem: "On Smallest" #

Jack Huber I can tell a lot of thought went into this poem. A nice read.

Jack


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Aug 18, 2009 6:13 am re: re: Poem: "On Smallest" #

Manohar Bhatia Hello,

Diane:Thank you for reading and liking a stanza
Jack: Your sweetness shows in your comments.

Manohar Bhatia


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Aug 18, 2009 6:53 am re: re: re: Poem: "On Smallest" #

Deb..... Always SMILING! Manohar simply beautiful, I loved every stanza in this poem! Chuckled on the last one though.


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Aug 18, 2009 7:02 am re: re: re: re: Poem: "On Smallest" #

Manohar Bhatia Hello,
Deb,little baby,thank you for enjoying.
Manohar Bhatia


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