"Oh! My Poor Little Head !" ..............Monday Poem

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Feb 22, 2010 4:21 am Monday Poem:::::: "Oh, my poor little head ! " #

Manohar Bhatia
What a marvellous struture
on top of our bodies!
It can think,store,innovate
countless thoughts,data,inventions.
Oh!my poor little head!

It can act better than
a computer,because its alive,
kicking,breathing as always.
Oh!my poor little head!

Man treats this head
with disdain,exploitation,extortion,
How many operations odered?
a thousand,a million,a billion,a trillion
Think before it gives way,
Oh!my poor little head!

Strike two heads,not for war,
but for cordial meeting
to discuss,argue,contemplate
for a better to-marrow.
Oh!my poor little head!

Make your head a friend,
loving,nourishing,messaging,resting,
every Sunday,during the week,
Then watch its performance.
Oh!my poor litle head!

Lose your hat,but
never lose your head.
Go East or West,
Human head is the best.
Oh!my poor littel head!

---The End---

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Manohar Bhatia.




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Feb 22, 2010 8:23 am re: Monday Poem:::::: "Oh, my poor little head ! " #

Diane Tegarden Manohar,
this is the funniest poem you've written yet! Here's my contribution.....

When I read too much
my eyes hurt, my head's sore
I can't stuff in another word, sentence or phrase,
not one more.
Oh! my poor little head!

;>
Diane T. and furfamily

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Feb 22, 2010 10:01 am re: Monday Poem:::::: "Oh, my poor little head ! " #

Jack Huber As usual, you've found a neat line to use as your refrain. Keep up the creative writing!

Jack


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Feb 22, 2010 11:07 am re: Monday Poem:::::: "Oh, my poor little head ! " #

Diane Stephenson Manohar:

Very inventive! I too like the way you have repeated the title throughout the poem bringing it all together. Good work.

Diane


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Feb 23, 2010 2:18 am re: re: Monday Poem:::::: "Oh, my poor little head ! " #

Maya Mahant Manohar,

Very funny, add on to yours and Diane's


My nose is red and runny
my ears all clogged and funny
an infernal cold is the cause
makes me in my chores pause,
my brain is going fuzzy buzzy
Oh!my poor little head.

Wordmeisters, I think Manohar here has us started on something really hilarious, like a friendship quilt, we can keep building on this one.

Maya


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Feb 23, 2010 12:15 pm re: re: re: Monday Poem:::::: "Oh, my poor little head ! " #

Ayub Bangroo
Hi Manohar,
If the head of a family,of a state,of a nation or of a country remains in order,everything would be right.
Your poem tells a truth though in a funny way.

Ayub


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Feb 23, 2010 11:56 pm re: re: Monday Poem:::::: "Oh, my poor little head ! " #

Manohar Bhatia Hi members,
Di::::Thank you for waking me up;when I wrote,I did not know that this will be my funiest poem---although I admit I am a little naughty fella.Here's an incident which might make you laugh....
"I must have been in standard IV in ANZA High School located at Byculla.Ous Maths teacher was Sir.Fernendes and was quite a character.So,whenever he used to enter our class.students will wisper into each other's ears that 'Draculla' has entered,because that was how he was nicknamed.I was quite a prank and I had this nasty habit of bottom pinching the girls.After the usual formalities of wishing good mornings was over,our Sir looked at the students with a stern face and as we stood up,I bottom pitched the girl standing in front of me.But,our 'Draculla' Sir caught me in the act and punished me by making me kneel down in front of the whole class for the entire period.I was quite embarassed......"
Jack:::As usual,thanks for the complenments.
Diane::So sweet of you to read the poem.
Ayub::I forgot that our 'head' can be looked up our "HEAD"
of a family;thanks for reminding.
A bouquet of thanks for all others.

Manohar Bhatia