F.O.R.M. Poetry::::::"Beyond The mountain Wall"

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Jan 06, 2010 8:39 pm F.O.R.M. Contest Grand Prize Winner- Manohar #

Jack Huber Thanks to all who participated in my contest, for which I received some sonnets, a septolet, a Monchielle, a musette, and a diamante.
The scores were all within 5 points of each other on my 40 point system (10 points each for conformity to form, level of difficulty, poignancy, and poetic content.) A very close contest, endeed!

The winner of the Grand Prize (an autographed copy of my latest book, A Splendid Alternative, is Manohar Bhatia with his Monchielle, "Beyond the Mountain Wall". Congratulations for a fine poem, Manohar!

Here's the winning piece:

Beyond the Mountain Wall

Beyond the mountain wall
at the end of valley
is beautiful plateau
with a cluster of huts
all same like a ghetto!

Beyond the mountain wall
is a breathtaking scene
the air, so crisp, clean, mild
for coloured flowers to bloom
and bees buzzing in wild!

Beyond the mountain wall
is nature's paradise
with gentle flowing stream
and small pebbles buried
on either banks in green!

Beyond the mountain wall
stands lovely Gothic Church
its tower bell ringing
a soothing soft sound
with people praying, singing!


Copyright © by Manohar Bhatia
All rights reserved.





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Jan 06, 2010 9:17 pm re: F.O.R.M. Contest Grand Prize Winner- Manohar #

Diane Tegarden Congratulations Manohar!

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Jan 06, 2010 11:12 pm re: F.O.R.M. Contest Grand Prize Winner- Manohar #

Diane Stephenson Congratulations! Well done, Manohar.

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Jan 07, 2010 12:08 am re: re: F.O.R.M. Contest Grand Prize Winner- Manohar #

Vincent Narayanan Hi Manohar!

Awesome. Congratulations. May more such encomiums come your way.

P&R
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Jan 07, 2010 3:16 am re: F.O.R.M. Contest Grand Prize Winner- Manohar #

Maya Mahant Congratulations Manohar, well done, lovely poem lyrical and visual.

Maya


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Jan 07, 2010 5:22 am re: F.O.R.M. Contest Grand Prize Winner- Manohar #

Manohar Bhatia Oh,Jack,
I am humbled and overjoyed to see my name as the winner of this contest.But,I can tell you Jack,that you are the real winner of this type of poetry,because you taught it to me.Sometimes back, a similar poem titled:"Ban On Cigarettes" was also attempted on this thread.
And,thank you Di,Diane,Maya and others for your congratulations;it has made me immensely happy.

Manohar Bhatia


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Jan 10, 2010 8:34 am re: re: F.O.R.M. Contest Grand Prize Winner- Manohar #

Rupa A virtual painting this one Manohar. You truly deserve the crown. Congratulations!


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Jan 11, 2010 1:18 am re: re: re: F.O.R.M. Contest Grand Prize Winner- Manohar #

Manohar Bhatia Rupa,
Thanks a million!

Manohar Bhatia