Monday Poem::::::: "What Is This Life.............?"

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Apr 19, 2010 3:24 am Monday Poem:::::::::::::::::: "What Is this Life..............?" #

Manohar Bhatia What is this life full of trouble
all the time for a rumble
but no time for a quiet grumble?

What is this life full of tension
all the time for an apprehension
but no time for an introspection?

What is this life full of discussion
all the time for a confrontation
but no time for an innovation?

What is life full of cocophony
all the time for blasphemy
but no time for hegemony?

What is life full of sadness
all the time for total madness
but no time for little goodness?

What is life full of doomsday
all the time for a death-day
but no time for an eventful day?

What is this life full of richness
all the time for deadly bitchiness
but no time for lovable playfullness?
-----The End----
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Manohar Bhatia



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Apr 19, 2010 9:03 am re: Monday Poem:::::::::::::::::: "What Is this Life..............?" #

Diane Tegarden Manohar,
good questions! Who knows why we become bitter and loose our playfulness.....sometimes life can just wear you down.

To a brighter day,
Diane

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Apr 19, 2010 9:30 am re: Monday Poem:::::::::::::::::: "What Is this Life..............?" #

Jack Huber Manohar,

You are fulfilling your job as a poet in asking these poignant questions. Well done. I look forward to your future poem that tries to answer them.

Jack


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Apr 19, 2010 12:00 pm re: re: Monday Poem:::::::::::::::::: "What Is this Life..............?" #

Ayub Bangroo
Manohar,
you have got a peculiar style of writing poetry.
This poem is in the nature of a debate putting some valid questions.It takes a whole life to answer such questions.i enjoyed the following lines especially:-

What is this life full of richness
all the time for deadly bitchiness
but no time for lovable playfullness?


Ayub



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Apr 19, 2010 1:23 pm re: Monday Poem:::::::::::::::::: "What Is this Life..............?" #

Diane Stephenson Manohar:

You have asked some very poignant questions that most people don't even think about let alone ask themselves. Perhaps if they did, your questions would not have to be asked? Your poem is very thought-provoking.

Diane


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Apr 20, 2010 12:49 am re: Monday Poem:::::::::::::::::: "What Is this Life..............?" #

Maya Mahant Manohar,

I concur with Ayub, you have a very distinctive style which has become your signature. Very thought provoking questions you have asked, I wish we had the right answers!

Maya


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Apr 20, 2010 1:51 am re: Monday Poem:::::::::::::::::: "What Is this Life..............?" #

Manohar Bhatia Hello,
Di::::I am an issue-based person and my mind always ticks on how to bring harmony in the world.Thanks for reading.
Jack::Yes,definitely I will try for some answers in my future poems.
Ayub::Yes,I do have my own style of writing poetry.Good that you enjoyed the last triplet.
Diane:Its very nice to read your response on the poem.
Maya::Your kind words are wholly appreciated.

Manohar Bhatia