A short poem:::::::: "Its My Choice........."

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Mar 15, 2010 9:32 am Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Manohar Bhatia Hi,
This is again a small poem,that struck to my mind on the one word:::; 'choice'
Here it goes::::

"Its My Choice......"
I like it bad,I like it good,
its my choice to think of food!

I like it high,I like it low
its my choice for the show!

I like it black,I like it white
its my choice to adjust my sight!

I like it left,I like it right
its my choice about my kite!

I like it forward,I like it backward
its me choice about my ward!

I like it fast,I like it slow
its my choice how I flow!

I like the silence,I like the noise
its my choice about the voice!

I like the bumpy,I like the dumpy
its my choice,if I become grumpy!

I like being lost,I like being found
its my choice of being dumbfound!

I like the drumstick,I like the drummer
its my choice if I play with a murmur!

Well Folks! I like it because I like it!

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Manohar Bhatia



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Mar 15, 2010 11:31 am re: Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Ayub Bangroo
Manohar,
your choice is always different,choice of words,choice of thought,choice of topic,all witty.It seems your prime choice to keep the readers in good humour.

Ayub


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Mar 15, 2010 12:04 pm re: re: Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Maya Mahant Manohar, The wit is not to be missed. The couplets lend a rhythm, sort of a marching song. I think Ayub has summed it up correctly.... to keep us smiling and in good humour.

Maya


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Mar 15, 2010 10:32 pm re: Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Diane Stephenson Manohar:

Unique! I agree with Ayub and Maya about your sense of humor. It's good to be upbeat and see the humorous side of life.

Diane


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Mar 16, 2010 10:01 am re: Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Jack Huber It's nice to play with words and phrases, isn't it? This one is cute, but you might experiment with adding a middle line to each of the couplets to add a little oomph to each thought. Since your couplet already rhymes, the added line would not have to.

In any case, I like it.

Jack


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Mar 17, 2010 7:01 am re: Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Manohar Bhatia Jack,
Thanks for the hint;here is my revised poem::::::

"Its My Choice...."

I like it bad,I like it good
watch your protruding tummy
its my choice to think of food!

I like it high,I like it low
are you afraid of height?
its my choice for the show!

I like it black,I like it white
its day now,its night later
its my choice to adjust my sight!

I like it left,I like it right
to keep my talent right
its my choice about my kite!

I like it forward,I like it backward
to drive my vehicle in
its my choice about my ward!

I like it fast,I like it slow
to let my feet dance in abundance
its my choice how I flow!

I like the silence,I like the noise
to play my musical instrument
its my choice of the voice!

I like the bumpy,I like the dumpy
of the ride on my bike
its my choice,if I become grumpy!

I like being lost,I like being found
in the fair around the market-place
its my choice of being dumbfound!

I like the drumstick,I like the drummer
who always plays hard & loud music
its my choice,if I play with a murmur!

Well Folks!I like it,because I like it!

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Mar 17, 2010 10:22 am re: re: Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Jack Huber I do like the triplets better. We'll have to see what others think, and how YOU feel about them...

Well done,

Jack


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Mar 17, 2010 3:53 pm re: re: re: Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Maya Mahant Manohar, it reads better, though I am foxed in certain places... however it can be put to artistic leeway.

Maya


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Mar 18, 2010 8:03 am re: re: re: Monday Poem:::::::::: "Its My Choice........." #

Manohar Bhatia Jack,
Thanks.....I do feel not so good about it...its my first attempt and done in a hurry.....will like to revamp this poem finally.Regards,
Manohar Bhatia